I think you have improved a lot this time. Your volume is clearer and speed is suitable. There are some changes in gestures and some parts of your verbal communication. Well done, Ashraf.. I think you have taken a lot of efforts for this video and I could see that you enjoyed sharing the content to your audience. Keep it up!!
As for your third speech, your voice projection is clearer and louder before. You also have suitable pace and better intonation as you pause and stress at important points. Your articulation of words is clearer than before when your speech is no longer slurred. Good job Asyraf, you managed to omit the “okay” filler in your speech!
There are improvements in regards with your non-verbal communication. You're more confident and enthusiastic, indicate appropriate facial expression, display a good posture, employ head movements to express your idea and have adequate eye contact with the audience. Congrats!
In regards with the content, the introduction is clear, the contents are well-elaborated and organized. But please summarise your speech before it ends, ya?
P/s: That’s creative Asyraf- you enhanced your video with effects. Interesting!
I think you have improved a lot this time. Your volume is clearer and speed is suitable. There are some changes in gestures and some parts of your verbal communication. Well done, Ashraf.. I think you have taken a lot of efforts for this video and I could see that you enjoyed sharing the content to your audience. Keep it up!!
ReplyDeleteI can see you enjoy sharing your speech with the audience and you're more confident this time. Good!
ReplyDeleteTotally agree with the previous comment. Asyraf you appear to be more confident and presentable, which is very positive...
ReplyDeleteAs salam. Hello Asyraf! How are you?
ReplyDeleteAs for your third speech, your voice projection is clearer and louder before. You also have suitable pace and better intonation as you pause and stress at important points. Your articulation of words is clearer than before when your speech is no longer slurred. Good job Asyraf, you managed to omit the “okay” filler in your speech!
There are improvements in regards with your non-verbal communication. You're more confident and enthusiastic, indicate appropriate facial expression, display a good posture, employ head movements to express your idea and have adequate eye contact with the audience. Congrats!
In regards with the content, the introduction is clear, the contents are well-elaborated and organized. But please summarise your speech before it ends, ya?
P/s: That’s creative Asyraf- you enhanced your video with effects. Interesting!
Best of luck!