The idea of having the recording to be full with sounds and colours is brilliant..but the sound should be slower than the speech.. I like the captions...they are clear..your contents look organized.. however, avoid showing that you read from something..your eyes movement show you are reading on something?? try to look at your audience more.. interact with them is better although you are informing them..overall nice attempt to explain about GST- the most sensitive issue nowadays in a proper manner...good job..
Your video is very informative. I would suggest that you can memorize all the main points of your presentation by using certain keywords and try to avoid reading text as to make the presentation to be more natural.
Your topic is very interesting as it talked about the current issues - GST. Good introduction Asyraf, you define it well and organise the ideas using linkers. However, you can make it better if you expand the contents in order for it to be more informative and summarise the content of the speech before it ends.
Verbally, the delivery would be made better if your voice projection is audible. Please work on your speed, intonation and diction. Avoid from having abrupt pauses or rushing the pace of your delivery. Practise your diction and try to articulate your words as clearly as possible. Plus, refrain yourself from reading the text as it will only result your speech to be monotonous and dull-like.
As for non-verbal communication, you look presentable. But please establish good rapport with your audience by maintaining your eye contact with them. Play with your facial expression, show positive body language and use your hand gestures to enumerate or emphasise your points. Believe me, your audience will be enthused with your speech!
I shared the same views as the previous viewers. As this is your fist video blog, you have started off with the right foot. It is just that you have to improve on certain aspects that have been suggested by the viewers. Good luck.
The idea of having the recording to be full with sounds and colours is brilliant..but the sound should be slower than the speech.. I like the captions...they are clear..your contents look organized.. however, avoid showing that you read from something..your eyes movement show you are reading on something?? try to look at your audience more.. interact with them is better although you are informing them..overall nice attempt to explain about GST- the most sensitive issue nowadays in a proper manner...good job..
ReplyDeleteHi Asyraf,
ReplyDeleteYour video is very informative. I would suggest that you can memorize all the main points of your presentation by using certain keywords and try to avoid reading text as to make the presentation to be more natural.
Regards~
It would be better if you look more at the cam...
ReplyDeleteHello Asyraf! How do you do?
ReplyDeleteYour topic is very interesting as it talked about the current issues - GST. Good introduction Asyraf, you define it well and organise the ideas using linkers. However, you can make it better if you expand the contents in order for it to be more informative and summarise the content of the speech before it ends.
Verbally, the delivery would be made better if your voice projection is audible. Please work on your speed, intonation and diction. Avoid from having abrupt pauses or rushing the pace of your delivery. Practise your diction and try to articulate your words as clearly as possible. Plus, refrain yourself from reading the text as it will only result your speech to be monotonous and dull-like.
As for non-verbal communication, you look presentable. But please establish good rapport with your audience by maintaining your eye contact with them. Play with your facial expression, show positive body language and use your hand gestures to enumerate or emphasise your points. Believe me, your audience will be enthused with your speech!
All the best, Asyraf. :)
Cheers!
P/s: Asyraf, please improve the angle of the recording, ya?
DeleteI shared the same views as the previous viewers. As this is your fist video blog, you have started off with the right foot. It is just that you have to improve on certain aspects that have been suggested by the viewers. Good luck.
ReplyDeleteGood luck :-)